Summer the MaRAY-Sue

I had way too much fun making this...sorry guys, better artwork will be coming soon XD

Anyways, every good fandom needs a blinding Mary-Sue character for everyone to laugh at; for every fan to look at and go 'well thank gawd I'm not the creator of THAT thing' XD

While Kisame originally created Summer for teh lulz, I wanted to see how'd she'd look in my style with more Mary-Sue attributes attached to her. Hope you approve Kisame ;D And I hope she gives you fellow fans and character creators out there a good laugh, I had quite a lot of fun writing her dialogue (download the full view for a higher quality/readable version)

...and yes...if you couldn't tell already, this is all for fun XD It's not intended to poke fun at any of my fellow fans, but more to laugh at Mary-Sue characteristics in general. In all my years as a Rayman fan I've never met any real Mary-Sue rayman fans...so instead playing with a made-up one was fun XD



Originally designed by ( [link] ), Summer is designed to be the MOST PERFECT RAYMAN FANCHARACTER EVAAAAAAAAR .

She is flawless in every way shape and form, endowed with almighty powers rivaling Rayman himself, the strength of mountains, the magic of the fairies, the grace of the elements, and blinding beauty which can melt the coldest of hearts. Her skills in battle are spectacular, and despite all villains wanting her to fight for her, her golden heart belongs to only one true hero. She will always fight for good, for the innocent, for love, and everyone respects and adores her for her selfless acts of courage and bravery. Whole armies have been cast asunder at her whim, and there is no being alive who is stronger than her. It's even said she's stronger than the god of Rayman's world, Polokus, and that her heart contains more energy and light than the Heart of the World.

She is immortal, maintaining her youthful features and energy no matter what battles come her way. She is kind, cute, playful, wise, mature, sexy, innocent, demure, sweet, charitable, brave, loyal, pure, commanding, determined, enchanting and inspriring, incapable of flaws or mistakes and lacking in any negative qualities whatsoever. All men bow before her royal demenor, all women wish they could be half the magnificent GODDESS that Summer is.

So how does Rayman feel about all of this?



For those unfamiliar with the Mary Sue concept, check out this handy-dandy guide
A Guide to Mary-Sues and OCs  A Guide to Recognizing Mary-Sue/ Gary-Stu Clichés

Disclamier: This text was based on  Mary-Sue Litmus Test .  All questions are gleaned from it and what I consider makes a Mary-sue. I’m not attacking anybody with this test. It’s simply an experiment that I’m doing. Even my own characters are going to be put to this test.

This is simply a listing of clichés that are more often used to describe MS’s and GS’s. By no means should you use this guide to determine if your character is a MS or GS. This guide is meant to help authors to recognize stale, clichéd characters and stories, so that they can turn