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Summer the MaRAY-Sue by raygirl Summer the MaRAY-Sue by raygirl


I had way too much fun making this...sorry guys, better artwork will be coming soon XD

Anyways, every good fandom needs a blinding Mary-Sue character for everyone to laugh at; for every fan to look at and go 'well thank gawd I'm not the creator of THAT thing' XD

While Kisame originally created Summer for teh lulz, I wanted to see how'd she'd look in my style with more Mary-Sue attributes attached to her. Hope you approve Kisame ;D And I hope she gives you fellow fans and character creators out there a good laugh, I had quite a lot of fun writing her dialogue (download the full view for a higher quality/readable version)

...and yes...if you couldn't tell already, this is all for fun XD It's not intended to poke fun at any of my fellow fans, but more to laugh at Mary-Sue characteristics in general. In all my years as a Rayman fan I've never met any real Mary-Sue rayman fans...so instead playing with a made-up one was fun XD



Originally designed by :iconkisamelovesjouchi: ( [link] ), Summer is designed to be the :star: MOST PERFECT RAYMAN FANCHARACTER EVAAAAAAAAR :star:.

:heart::heart::heart: She is flawless in every way shape and form, endowed with almighty powers rivaling Rayman himself, the strength of mountains, the magic of the fairies, the grace of the elements, and blinding beauty which can melt the coldest of hearts. Her skills in battle are spectacular, and despite all villains wanting her to fight for her, her golden heart belongs to only one true hero. She will always fight for good, for the innocent, for love, and everyone respects and adores her for her selfless acts of courage and bravery. Whole armies have been cast asunder at her whim, and there is no being alive who is stronger than her. It's even said she's stronger than the god of Rayman's world, Polokus, and that her heart contains more energy and light than the Heart of the World.:heart::heart::heart:

:heart::heart::heart:She is immortal, maintaining her youthful features and energy no matter what battles come her way. She is kind, cute, playful, wise, mature, sexy, innocent, demure, sweet, charitable, brave, loyal, pure, commanding, determined, enchanting and inspriring, incapable of flaws or mistakes and lacking in any negative qualities whatsoever. All men bow before her royal demenor, all women wish they could be half the magnificent GODDESS that Summer is.:heart::heart::heart:


So how does Rayman feel about all of this?
:iconraymanwhutplz::iconraymanisnothappyplz::iconraymanplz:


For those unfamiliar with the Mary Sue concept, check out this handy-dandy guide
A Guide to Mary-Sues and OCs  A Guide to Recognizing Mary-Sue/ Gary-Stu Clichés

Disclamier: This text was based on  Mary-Sue Litmus Test .  All questions are gleaned from it and what I consider makes a Mary-sue. I’m not attacking anybody with this test. It’s simply an experiment that I’m doing. Even my own characters are going to be put to this test.

This is simply a listing of clichés that are more often used to describe MS’s and GS’s. By no means should you use this guide to determine if your character is a MS or GS. This guide is meant to help authors to recognize stale, clichéd characters and stories, so that they can turn
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:iconblondetardis26:
BLONDETARDIS26 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015
such a colourful character, ain't she?
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:iconshewolfzoroark:
shewolfzoroark Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I . . . I think my eyes exploded . . . 
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:iconworran:
Worran Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I should have read this before i made my Fan~character commic... worran.deviantart.com/art/Pyre…

i had to find out what Mary-Sue was..... THIS WOULD HAVE BEEN MUCH MORE FUN TO LEARN!

*but it's still freakin funny to read though! xD
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:icongeno2733:
Geno2733 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
Wendy Koopa on a VERY bad trip...
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:iconlunarswolf:
LunarsWolf Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! Kawaiii! Desu!!00010101011010!....(after saying that as if some obsessive Japanese wannabe fangirl... I deserve to die...)

She is like... extremely bright & colorful, that it literally burns my eyes, it's just so painful to look at her...
Bleedrainbow  
I feel for you Rayman, I feel for you...
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:icongeno2733:
Geno2733 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
And this is why you don't want to apparate without a license..
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:iconasfiction:
Asfiction Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Artist
O.O
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:iconalvittanyallday:
alvittanyallday Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
way to many colors for my eyes but funny the first thing I looked at in this pic was the piercing on the wing I was like e.o 
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:iconcandypop999:
CandyPop999 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
THE COLORZ BURN MY EYEEZZZ!!!11!!! :iconcryingrainbowsplz:
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:iconsissysonikku:
sissysonikku Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'M LAUGHING TOO HARD
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Professional Filmographer
oh dear, be careful! I don't want you to die laughing XD
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:iconhappy-derp:
happy-derp Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
oh my god
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:iconsissysonikku:
sissysonikku Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
INDEED
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:iconsissysonikku:
sissysonikku Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
INDEED
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:iconcreepypastagoth:
CreepypastaGoth Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If she's half rabbid then that should make things worse. As far as I'm aware Rayman got harrassed by them.XD
I feel sorry for the guy but I can't stop laughing.

RUN FOR THE HILLS! GET ALCATRAST!XD -SHOT- Ok I'll stop.
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Professional Filmographer
oh no it is perfectly ok to laugh ;D
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:iconcreepypastagoth:
CreepypastaGoth Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:icons325diana:
s325Diana Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
What happened with her creator? lol
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:iconpokemon-rainbows:
Pokemon-Rainbows Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm going to cry...
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:iconkawaiipikachuhugs:
KawaiiPikachuHugs Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
''Rayman cried, like, FOREVER, over my sexy dead body.''
OMG LOL
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:iconbluedog444:
bluedog444 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Shade: Target found. *shoots Summer in the head with her pistol*
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional Filmographer
DON'T, YOU'LL ONLY MAKE HER MAD
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:iconbluedog444:
bluedog444 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
*Shade runs away*
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Professional Filmographer
RUN, RUN WHILE YOU STILL CAN
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:iconchaosisx:
Chaosisx Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
supra kawaii desu purfakt cnhariktoor i shep hr weth raimuhn <3 <3 <3
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Filmographer
ZOMIGOD u understaand my beeootuful pairing of TROO WUV FANK OO
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:iconchaosisx:
Chaosisx Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
ofkurs ai doh itz ma OTP
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:iconluted:
Luted Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
my brain cells died after reading the WHOLE thing
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Professional Filmographer
...why....WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO YOURSELF XD
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:iconphoenixskywriter:
PhoenixSkywriter Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You can't kill her guys... she's a Mary Sue, so she's also half god. Also, she'd regenerate at once and she's immortal :3
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Yeah I think people are better off running for the hills! Thanks for the fave ;)
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:iconkittyjoy:
KittyJoy Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: Oh-OH GOOD GOLLY! *PULLS OUT ROCKET BAZOOKA* I'M KILLING IT NOW!
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:iconkirby-dash:
Kirby-Dash Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me: Mary Sue written all over it.
Dash: FREAKING Mary Sue.:icontoolongdidntreadplz:
Me: I did...:iconohgodwhyplz:
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Professional Filmographer
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO YOURSELF

I didn't read it and I WROTE IT XD
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:iconkirby-dash:
Kirby-Dash Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please! Erase my mind!! I still have the words "PURE and INNOCENT" inside my head!!
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:iconbunnyferrit12:
BunnyFerrit12 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOLZ.

SHE IZ LIEK. DA BST FAVCHARICTA EVA
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Filmographer
OHMIGAH SHE IZ TEH MOST FABULUS ND SEXI OV ALL FANKARAKTARS
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:iconbunnyferrit12:
BunnyFerrit12 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BST CHARARTER EVAAAAAAAAA
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:iconcatel1:
catel1 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
I didn't have enough words to say the good I think of this badness so i'll just fave it.
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Professional Filmographer
You are a brave, brave soul XD
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:iconaquastick102:
Aquastick102 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OH MY GOD IT'S HIDEOUS.

BANISH THE DEMON, THERE'S A SPECIAL PLACE IN HELL JUST FOR IT. :D
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:iconcandypop999:
CandyPop999 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
This is amazing! Looks just like Bone Art. But she has so many things on her it looks weird and it's hard to see the detail.
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Bone? you mean like the comic?

Perhaps you should read the image comments, it might make the picture easier to understand :)
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:iconthe-lazy-flare:
The-Lazy-Flare Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...KILL IT WITH FIRE !!
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Professional Filmographer
No don't!!! the fire will cause a nuclear reaction and kill us all!!!!!
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:iconthe-lazy-flare:
The-Lazy-Flare Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH NOES :ohnoes: then what do we do ??
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:iconraygirl:
raygirl Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Professional Filmographer
I recommend not making eye contact and moving to a safe distance behind a blast shield
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:iconthe-lazy-flare:
The-Lazy-Flare Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*does just that* alright, FIRE IN THE WHOLE !!!
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:iconharppukana:
Harppukana Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist
This is glorious :lol:
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:iconinvader-sid12:
Invader-Sid12 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
:iconwthplz: *gets a gun* :icongunplz: BYE!
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